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as i sit and wonder about the past
i get the feeling that it never could last
that all my efforts were in vain
i sit and watch them wash down the drain

swirling down, every last drop
its distant but i can hear a pop
i look around me and realise i am home
the water freezing me to the bone

i see my past in perfect orbs fly away
please don't take my memories of yesterday
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i was in the bath not to long ago cos i had serious period pains and they were literally killing me. i felt sick and i could stand up incase i vomited so i threw myself in the bath and let it fill up. i put some bubble bath in. i haven't had any since i was a kid and it made me think back on the past (it doesn't take much to make me do that btw)
and i ended up falling asleep. i woke up and it was freezing. i'm still freezing and in pain.

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:iconhylian-maiden:
I can relate to this poem. Things were easier to deal with and happier back then, to me. As times get expectantly worse, I remember the good times.

Sorry to hear you're feeling bad. Some other people aren't feeling good, either. Is something going around? :?
Anyways, hope you feel better.

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its probably just period pains on its own but my mum is sick at the moment so may end up with what she has.
thank you for the comment and the lovely words in it.

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The flower has withered
it withered even before it bloomed
it withered because of me
i killed the flower
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The rhyming fits together nicely. I like the concept.

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thanks

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The flower has withered
it withered even before it bloomed
it withered because of me
i killed the flower

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